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@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Others in his urrage either thought too little of music as a job, or thought
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too much of it and considered something else to do for themselves. Every few weeks, there
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would be some event where the towsnfolk would want to enjoy a few hours with
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music. Luckily, his teacher had already handpicked a group of three
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individuals who were good enough to read musical sheets the Nuklo disburses
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individuals who were good enough to read musical sheets Nuklo disburses
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and also play them almost accurately.
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Kakri played the drums. Ever since he started his schooling from the neighbouring urrage,
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@ -64,9 +64,9 @@ and that was enough for Kakri to get by without his parent's money.
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Hakem played the electric guitar. While his wife fell for his guitar skills,
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she is disappointed over his decision to remain a guitarist in a local band. Nobody
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knows much of his upbringing, except that he once pulled a tiger's whisker as a
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kid. Hakem maintains that is his origin story towards playing the guitar.
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kid. Hakem maintains that this was his origin story towards playing the guitar.
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The most depressed person in the urrage was Getop. She lost her parents when she
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The most depressed person in the urrage was probably Getop. She lost her parents when she
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was ten to a freak accident involving a shortcircuited battery of an elcar.
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Growing up in an orphanage, she never grew out of her loss. In a bid to help her
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survive life, Nuklo's master gave her a bass guitar and taught her to play the
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@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ the streets surrounding the ground.
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_"Native Veinier scum - 4th street"_ a Herghul spoke in her mic that
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was attached to her collar. Another Herghul a short distance away moved his
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forefinger from his hear, looked towards her and nodded.
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forefinger from his ear, looked towards her and nodded.
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Nuklo looked towards the moon again and briefly considered if it grew in size.
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Before the war, classism and racism, though conceivable and sometimes practised,
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@ -108,13 +108,12 @@ Sedrams have no face beneath their green shrouds.
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He slowly walked inside the field now towards his group. The leader of his platoon
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waved his hands at him and shouted something. He knew it was some other racial slur
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and so started jogging towards him fast. The Herghul leader turned around and
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started speaking to another of his Klaas. He went and stood in the his designated
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started speaking to another of his Klaas. He went and stood in his designated
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squad of Veiniers in that platoon. Something was bothering him today. The night
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felt strange.
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Nobody spoke in the squad. It was not permitted for anyone below Herghul to talk
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in the presence of other Herghul's. That group comprised only of Veiniers today
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as it was the only other Klaas required to march. His squad had 10 Veiniers, all
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in the presence of other Herghul's. His squad had 10 Veiniers, all
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natives of Miklen before the war. He was surprised to see that there were no women
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in this particular squad he was part of.
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@ -123,11 +122,11 @@ Nuklo suddenly felt his body lose some weight.
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There was a loud horn, signalling the start of the march. All Veiniers who
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couldn't make it in time will be incinerated by the Herghul hekuzens later. A force
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field shot up near the borders of the ground. A few minutes later, the stands
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surrounding the ground started emerging from below. The other Klaases have to
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surrounding the ground started emerging from below. The other lower Klaases have to
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arrive few hours back and populate the spectator stands underground to avoid
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conjestion when the Herghuls and Veiniers arrive.
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_"Crajki'it"_ - the leader shouted, bringing his closed fist near his chest and
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_"Crajki'it"_ - the leader shouted, brought his closed fist near his chest and
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looked up.
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Another wave and Nuklo felt his body become even more lighter.
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@ -135,17 +134,17 @@ Another wave and Nuklo felt his body become even more lighter.
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That was odd, this never happens when the spectator stands rise up before a march.
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He had a feeling that everyone else around him also felt the same way
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because all of them broke their stance briefly. _Maybe this was a new module
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tested out by the Herghuls_.
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being tested out by the Herghuls_.
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_"Crajki'it"_ - all members of all his squads followed the leader.
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Everyone put their hands and heads down after the roar except Nuklo. A Herghul
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walked towards Nuklo with his hekuzen primed. Before she could shoot, there was
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another one of those sweeping waves and Nuklo felt none of his weigth this time.
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another one of those sweeping waves.
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It was accompanied by a soft noise of a single drop of water dripping from a leaky tap.
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The Herghul lost balance momentarily and dropped her weapon. Picking it up again,
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she looked ahead and saw all the Veiniers float a couple of arm lengths in the
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air.
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The Herghul lost balance momentarily and dropped her weapon. Nuklo felt completely weightless now. Picking up her weapon, the Herghul looked ahead and saw all the Veiniers float a couple of arm lengths in the air!!
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_"Th.. The Mooo..."_ Nuklo fainted and floated mid-air before he could complete the sentence.
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_"Th.. The Mooo..."_
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Nuklo fainted and floated mid-air before he could complete the sentence.
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