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@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Others in his urrage either thought too little of music as a job, or thought
too much of it and considered something else to do for themselves. Every few weeks, there too much of it and considered something else to do for themselves. Every few weeks, there
would be some event where the towsnfolk would want to enjoy a few hours with would be some event where the towsnfolk would want to enjoy a few hours with
music. Luckily, his teacher had already handpicked a group of three music. Luckily, his teacher had already handpicked a group of three
individuals who were good enough to read musical sheets the Nuklo disburses individuals who were good enough to read musical sheets Nuklo disburses
and also play them almost accurately. and also play them almost accurately.
Kakri played the drums. Ever since he started his schooling from the neighbouring urrage, Kakri played the drums. Ever since he started his schooling from the neighbouring urrage,
@ -64,9 +64,9 @@ and that was enough for Kakri to get by without his parent's money.
Hakem played the electric guitar. While his wife fell for his guitar skills, Hakem played the electric guitar. While his wife fell for his guitar skills,
she is disappointed over his decision to remain a guitarist in a local band. Nobody she is disappointed over his decision to remain a guitarist in a local band. Nobody
knows much of his upbringing, except that he once pulled a tiger's whisker as a knows much of his upbringing, except that he once pulled a tiger's whisker as a
kid. Hakem maintains that is his origin story towards playing the guitar. kid. Hakem maintains that this was his origin story towards playing the guitar.
The most depressed person in the urrage was Getop. She lost her parents when she The most depressed person in the urrage was probably Getop. She lost her parents when she
was ten to a freak accident involving a shortcircuited battery of an elcar. was ten to a freak accident involving a shortcircuited battery of an elcar.
Growing up in an orphanage, she never grew out of her loss. In a bid to help her Growing up in an orphanage, she never grew out of her loss. In a bid to help her
survive life, Nuklo's master gave her a bass guitar and taught her to play the survive life, Nuklo's master gave her a bass guitar and taught her to play the
@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ the streets surrounding the ground.
_"Native Veinier scum - 4th street"_ a Herghul spoke in her mic that _"Native Veinier scum - 4th street"_ a Herghul spoke in her mic that
was attached to her collar. Another Herghul a short distance away moved his was attached to her collar. Another Herghul a short distance away moved his
forefinger from his hear, looked towards her and nodded. forefinger from his ear, looked towards her and nodded.
Nuklo looked towards the moon again and briefly considered if it grew in size. Nuklo looked towards the moon again and briefly considered if it grew in size.
Before the war, classism and racism, though conceivable and sometimes practised, Before the war, classism and racism, though conceivable and sometimes practised,
@ -108,13 +108,12 @@ Sedrams have no face beneath their green shrouds.
He slowly walked inside the field now towards his group. The leader of his platoon He slowly walked inside the field now towards his group. The leader of his platoon
waved his hands at him and shouted something. He knew it was some other racial slur waved his hands at him and shouted something. He knew it was some other racial slur
and so started jogging towards him fast. The Herghul leader turned around and and so started jogging towards him fast. The Herghul leader turned around and
started speaking to another of his Klaas. He went and stood in the his designated started speaking to another of his Klaas. He went and stood in his designated
squad of Veiniers in that platoon. Something was bothering him today. The night squad of Veiniers in that platoon. Something was bothering him today. The night
felt strange. felt strange.
Nobody spoke in the squad. It was not permitted for anyone below Herghul to talk Nobody spoke in the squad. It was not permitted for anyone below Herghul to talk
in the presence of other Herghul's. That group comprised only of Veiniers today in the presence of other Herghul's. His squad had 10 Veiniers, all
as it was the only other Klaas required to march. His squad had 10 Veiniers, all
natives of Miklen before the war. He was surprised to see that there were no women natives of Miklen before the war. He was surprised to see that there were no women
in this particular squad he was part of. in this particular squad he was part of.
@ -123,11 +122,11 @@ Nuklo suddenly felt his body lose some weight.
There was a loud horn, signalling the start of the march. All Veiniers who There was a loud horn, signalling the start of the march. All Veiniers who
couldn't make it in time will be incinerated by the Herghul hekuzens later. A force couldn't make it in time will be incinerated by the Herghul hekuzens later. A force
field shot up near the borders of the ground. A few minutes later, the stands field shot up near the borders of the ground. A few minutes later, the stands
surrounding the ground started emerging from below. The other Klaases have to surrounding the ground started emerging from below. The other lower Klaases have to
arrive few hours back and populate the spectator stands underground to avoid arrive few hours back and populate the spectator stands underground to avoid
conjestion when the Herghuls and Veiniers arrive. conjestion when the Herghuls and Veiniers arrive.
_"Crajki'it"_ - the leader shouted, bringing his closed fist near his chest and _"Crajki'it"_ - the leader shouted, brought his closed fist near his chest and
looked up. looked up.
Another wave and Nuklo felt his body become even more lighter. Another wave and Nuklo felt his body become even more lighter.
@ -135,17 +134,17 @@ Another wave and Nuklo felt his body become even more lighter.
That was odd, this never happens when the spectator stands rise up before a march. That was odd, this never happens when the spectator stands rise up before a march.
He had a feeling that everyone else around him also felt the same way He had a feeling that everyone else around him also felt the same way
because all of them broke their stance briefly. _Maybe this was a new module because all of them broke their stance briefly. _Maybe this was a new module
tested out by the Herghuls_. being tested out by the Herghuls_.
_"Crajki'it"_ - all members of all his squads followed the leader. _"Crajki'it"_ - all members of all his squads followed the leader.
Everyone put their hands and heads down after the roar except Nuklo. A Herghul Everyone put their hands and heads down after the roar except Nuklo. A Herghul
walked towards Nuklo with his hekuzen primed. Before she could shoot, there was walked towards Nuklo with his hekuzen primed. Before she could shoot, there was
another one of those sweeping waves and Nuklo felt none of his weigth this time. another one of those sweeping waves.
It was accompanied by a soft noise of a single drop of water dripping from a leaky tap. It was accompanied by a soft noise of a single drop of water dripping from a leaky tap.
The Herghul lost balance momentarily and dropped her weapon. Picking it up again, The Herghul lost balance momentarily and dropped her weapon. Nuklo felt completely weightless now. Picking up her weapon, the Herghul looked ahead and saw all the Veiniers float a couple of arm lengths in the air!!
she looked ahead and saw all the Veiniers float a couple of arm lengths in the
air.
_"Th.. The Mooo..."_ Nuklo fainted and floated mid-air before he could complete the sentence. _"Th.. The Mooo..."_
Nuklo fainted and floated mid-air before he could complete the sentence.